Big-Boss's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Airjam]

The amount of detail to everything here is incredible. I like how it has a cartoon-ish style to it. I also like how there is so much going on with this piece of art. It is a very entertaining piece to look at.

Your artwork never disappoints! Keep up the great work!

Kamikaye responds:

THanks a lot :) Glad to make you feel entertained by this !

[Flashy Pose]

You do have some potential, but there are several things wrong with your artwork here.

First off, I do not know what is going on with her left hand, well, because, she doesn't have one! It's just a stump, not a hand. For her fingertips, they all should be the same shape. Her thumb is pointed as well as her index finger when they should be rounded. The best looking finger is her middle one.

Second, her eyelashes are uneven. Her left eyelashes are more straight, while her right ones have a bent line that form them.

Third, I can tell that you were trying to create some shine off of her body, but the pink light that is on her skin looks very unnatural. It looks particularly bad on her stomach and on her butt. You need to make the shine color more white to make it look more natural.

Fourth, the design of the top of her leg stocking is very poorly done. None of the lacing is the same size or shape. The lines are very messy as well.

Last of all, her left foot is misshapen. Her right one looks fine, but the left one has a weird arch in the middle. It should be curved line if she's bending her toes. Also, her big toe should not bend downward that much.

You really need to work on both your lines and the size and shape of what you're drawing the most. Your previous artwork looks much better than this piece, so I don't know what happened here. My guess is that you rushed yourself because you can obviously draw better judging from your previous submissions. Take your time next time because you can do better.

HadenDA responds:

Thank you for the advice! The main problem with drawing this was that I originally sketched it but my printer wasn't working so I had to take a picture of it. Sure enough, I took the picture at a poor angle but didn't realize it till I was finished.

And yes, it was also rushed.

[Terra]

The rocks and cliffs here have the same texture as the ones in your 'Power of Nature' painting, which isn't a bad thing, of course, but I kind of wish you gave them a different look. It's a good thing to experiment with some different textures. Even with that being said, I cannot argue with how detailed the rocks and cliffs are with cracks and how you made them look jagged in all of the right places. Also, the light brown color of the rocks and the light blue color of the sky go well together, so good job on that.

By the way, was this entire painting based off of your friends idea or did you add a couple things yourself?

SkyrisDesign responds:

This piece was done simultaneously with the Power of Nature so I was doing the same thing over xD LOL. And he asked me to critique his work and I kinda went off with it. I can link his original work for you to see.

[Conker the Squirrel Sculpture]

Wow, this is some professional grade work, very well done! It's a very appealing piece of artwork. From his face to the bottom of his sneakers, it is very detailed, top notch work. The paint job is also high quality. It is very cleanly done from what I can see, no overlapping of colors.

This looks like a statuette that would be sold in a store and if I was a Conker fan I would definitely buy it.

[Power of Nature Murals]

Wow, there is so much potential and excellence in this painting. I shall evaluate each frame by itself to give a more effective review. :)

1st frame: I can tell that the space atmosphere is full of detail that took quite some patience to complete. You do not get such a well balanced combination of colors and stars without patience. After looking through all of the frames beforehand, this one is my favorite.

2nd frame: There is some lovely detailing here, but there are also flaws. The man that is shaded mostly grey and a little to the right of the goddess in the middle has a very bulky and misshapen left arm. The legs of the man right beside him are too short for his stature and his feet are awkward looking. I also see this issue with the left foot of the man I mentioned before and a couple others in this painting. I'm not sure if the feet were intended to be drawn that way, but either way they do not look well done and therefore, not impressive.

3rd frame: The detail is great, the layout of the land is substantial, and if the smoke from the volcano is supposed to be creating a dark cloud in which the lightning is striking down from, it is a magnificent and creative idea. It also has kind of a cartoonish vibe to it, which I like. One thing I did notice though is that the white clouds near the cracked part of the volcano with molten lava inside should probably also be dark. The same kind of issue falls upon the cloud that is below the big dark cloud of smoke that is emerging from the volcano. That should not be white, since it's so close to that cloud of smoke.

4th frame: I know you uploaded this piece of artwork alone and it is a very well done piece, but I feel as if the mountains are not detailed enough. I feel that you would usually add some more detail to them in a painting of yours. It kind of makes the quality of the mountains stand apart from the detail of the ship and water, which are more well done.

5th frame: I can see that this piece was done to show the murkiness of an underwater marine environment (or maybe that's just me). At first, I thought this should've been more detailed, but it actually captures a more realistic outlook once I thought a little deeper.

6th frame: This last frame is a very interesting piece. How I comprehend this painting is that it's deeply below the ocean as the entrance to Hell or the Earth's center. The demon depicted is nicely detailed and holds well to his fiery environment. The lava behind him is a nice touch, since the light illuminating from it reflects off of him, creating a more sinister vibe.

There is definitely some work that needs to be done on some of the pieces, but they all hold great potential. One thing that I did not mention is that I love how all the frames blend together, that was a brilliant idea. I saw in your Author's Comments that this was a collab, so I hope that they can receive this constructive criticism from you, perhaps. I want all artists who worked on this collab to see where they can improve. :)

You did a good job, nonetheless, and same goes for the artists you collabed with.

SkyrisDesign responds:

Thank you so much for putting so much time on this review. It was reallyy helpful. Ill make sure the rest of the artists read this :D

[Under the Stars]

I'm not sure if this painting is supposed to resemble The Lion King, but that's what I think of when I see it and I love it. The structure of the lions' bodies from head to toe are amazing. You really got the anatomy of a lion down to how the face is shaped to the muscular structure of the legs, necks, shoulders, everything, really. You also did a very nice job shading both the rocks and the lions to make the shine coming off of them look just right.

I also love how the sky transforms from a sunset to a starry, blue night sky and then to a starry, dark blue night sky. It really captures how the sky changes when it's turning into night.

This is some very high quality work and it brings back some nostalgia for me, so this is going into my favorites. Keep up the amazing work!

[Chapter 4: City of Hodorin]

Wow, two months to make this masterpiece, huh? It was definitely worth it. The city gives me a futuristic Greek or Roman kind of vibe, I love it. With all the small lines you used to make the detail of the city I'm surprised it didn't take you longer to complete this piece of art. It must've been a pain since you gave the city a distant perspective as if someone is looking from afar. Aside from that, the edges of the mountain are great, the clouds look incredible, and the plant life is well done, especially the luscious plant life in the bottom right hand corner.

I hope one day a piece of your artwork gets front-paged because you are really improving. I hardly ever see great landscape paintings get front-paged and in my opinion, you're overdue because your landscape paintings are incredible.

SkyrisDesign responds:

Thanks for the heartwarming comment. :D I've been doing hundreds of masters studies within the past two months and this is the result of all that hard work. I hope you stick around because i have more great stuff incoming.

[Common Guys, Wait Up!]

You have a very nice and clean drawing style. You know how to draw textures and clothing detail well. But the big issue I see here is how his left foot is about to be planted on the ground. It looks as if his ankle is broken or twisted, it's completely unnatural. Just keep practicing, I'm sure you'll get better.

[The Red Crusader]

I see you said in your author comments that this is the first character that you're actually proud of, but you should be proud of your other ones too. I know you did another painting titled 'Rath', in which you painted a character and yes, it's nowhere near as good as this painting right here, but it's still a decent painting with lots of potential and you should be proud of that. The comparison between those two paintings show how your skills have improved tremendously. I know you don't upload artwork too often, but when you do it's really worth the wait, if you ask me.

With this painting, I love the detail and the pose that the solider is in. I also find the cast of what seems to be a ghostly apparition of the soldier emanating from the side of his body to be very cool. One problem I see is that the skirting of his armor should be equal in length. Some parts are longer or shorter (depending on how you look at it) when compared to the other parts of the skirting. It's something that can be very easily overlooked, so don't beat yourself up about it.

I hope to see some new artwork from you sooner rather than later. :)

SkyrisDesign responds:

Thanks for taking ur time on this comment. I really do appreciate your feedback! I am not really good at character stuff and usually I would have a lot of anatomy mistakes and it bothers me. And sorry about the wait. I spend A LOT of time on each and every piece while doing tons of studies in between. I only upload final pieces on Newgrounds so if you are interested in other stuff I am doing, you can check out my deviant art or tumblr!

[Snowy]

Looks really video-gamey if you ask me, but that's not a bad thing! It actually looks kind of cool since it matches the texture of the landscapes you might see in an RPG. I suppose it was a nice change of pace for you, since you used a different technique. I prefer the way you usually make your landscapes, but this is nice too. :)

1600 responds:

Thanks, I'm actually gonna be working on making 3D assets for a game so this is sorta practice for that :)