I really like the club vibe that the song has. I also like the kick. But that's about it when it comes to what I like about this song.
This song just has too many unfitting sounds in it. The one that stands out the most is that high pitched"hopping" sound. Also, the main techno sound in this song kind of sounds like a bad soundtrack from an old SNES game.
Your transitioning could also use some work. I just didn't think that using a couple of seconds of silence was a good form of transitioning in this song. It just didn't sound right.
This song started off promising, but then everything I listed above happened. It needs a lot of work, but it's definitely not terrible. Just keep on improving!