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The first one was better.

AnimatedCritic responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

It's cool, but there's not enough to it yet.

brodybehere responds:

remember this isn't a finished project just an teaser trailer. sooo not done yet

This is really bad. please don't submit such poor quality work to Newgrounds. We like animations here, too, so your video is out of place and people really won't like it. Post it to you tube, but leave Newgrounds as animations only. And, I know what you said about it being 'approved.' Doesn't matter. It's still horrible, and is out of place on a site for animations.

Master-Awesome responds:

Well, it still beats my past movies. It's because of reviews like these that I get a lot better in my work. I'm sorry if it wasn't the movie you were looking forward to. I will try to do better next time.

This IS an animation. You should change your first line.

"It's not a flash animation, so the animations are more subtle. Don't expect some action events, but enjoy the mood! And by the way: It's not a loop."

Should be changed to:

"It's a very slow flash animation, so the animations are subtle. Don't expect action, but enjoy the mood! And by the way: It's not a loop."

Just thought I'd give you a little bit of advice. :)

Conquestus responds:

Ok, thx. I changed it again, but I can't agree to the term flash animation, since it wasn't created with any flash software. ^^

I thought that Walt freaking out about wanting to cook meth was funny and I also liked the voice for him, but the voice for Jesse was horrible. It was too quiet and had no emotion behind it. His dialogue was also very poorly done because it was too simplistic. Your animation style is nice and clean, but again, the voice acting for Jesse was terrible.

MackleNG responds:

well its a good thing I'm the animator, and not the voice actor haha

It has potential to be good, and yet it's so unfinished that I don't think it should be on here yet. I'd loce to see it once it's done, though.

ILikePurple responds:

As I said, it´s a simple precut. I´m working on it. :) It´s my first try to do such an animation. But thanks for your response. :)

It's pretty decent for a first animation. The drawing is okay, but it's pretty crude. You should try getting a voice actor or you could do voice acting yourself. Putting more effort in gets you a higher score.

JuCstin responds:

It was silent on purpose

Wow, your animation is incredible! I'm surprised you don't have more fans on here. The voice acting is very well done as well as the mouth movement, but I think Swami's voice should be improved on so it doesn't sound out of synch like it does. Other than that, keep up the great work and I can't wait to see more from you!

Tanadrine-Studios responds:

Thanks! I do try my hardest to improve with every piece of content we publish.

We'll see about budgeting for some better audio equipment for Swami's VA later down the road.

You do know that this is NOT Newgrounds approved material, right? You even say in your author comments that you made it on Youtube, so why not upload it there? This material is actually approved there. Also, just because you own it doesn't mean it shouldn't be removed. If that was the case, everything uploaded to Newgrounds would pass judgment and stay. You should really take this down and upload a movie when you learn to make flash. When that day comes, hopefully it passes judgment and you can work on how to improve your work from there with the constructive criticism you receive.

wackyhouse responds:

Well sir you are wrong it just got past judgement

I really love your guys' animation and humor! You guys defiantly need more fans! I also love the PLUS goblins idea. It reminds me of the underpants gnomes from South Park. lol

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