The first one was better.
The first one was better.
Thanks for the feedback!
This IS an animation. You should change your first line.
"It's not a flash animation, so the animations are more subtle. Don't expect some action events, but enjoy the mood! And by the way: It's not a loop."
Should be changed to:
"It's a very slow flash animation, so the animations are subtle. Don't expect action, but enjoy the mood! And by the way: It's not a loop."
Just thought I'd give you a little bit of advice. :)
Ok, thx. I changed it again, but I can't agree to the term flash animation, since it wasn't created with any flash software. ^^
I thought that Walt freaking out about wanting to cook meth was funny and I also liked the voice for him, but the voice for Jesse was horrible. It was too quiet and had no emotion behind it. His dialogue was also very poorly done because it was too simplistic. Your animation style is nice and clean, but again, the voice acting for Jesse was terrible.
well its a good thing I'm the animator, and not the voice actor haha
It's pretty decent for a first animation. The drawing is okay, but it's pretty crude. You should try getting a voice actor or you could do voice acting yourself. Putting more effort in gets you a higher score.
It was silent on purpose
Wow, your animation is incredible! I'm surprised you don't have more fans on here. The voice acting is very well done as well as the mouth movement, but I think Swami's voice should be improved on so it doesn't sound out of synch like it does. Other than that, keep up the great work and I can't wait to see more from you!
Thanks! I do try my hardest to improve with every piece of content we publish.
We'll see about budgeting for some better audio equipment for Swami's VA later down the road.
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