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Your Snake voice was pretty good. Your Psycho Mantis voice, though? Not so much. Also, I don't understand what the point was of that live action clip at the end. You should've left that out completely and made the animation itself a bit longer.

Not a bad animation, but it definitely could've been a lot better. There's a lot of room for improvement.

GreenyPM responds:

Thanks for the Feedback I really appreciate it! Constructive Criticism is good it helps me grow.

Very well animated and fun to watch! I loved all of the different sound effects you used. You used a pretty wide range of different sound effects.

The Yoshi stampede part was pretty funny and was probably my favorite part. Good work!

Jozarto responds:

Thank you! I appreciate it.

I like your drawing style, but the animation itself is so awkward. All of the wolf's movements are very weird. His mouth doesn't move when he talks, which is unrealistic.

I like your voice acting as well, but the spacing out of when he speaks is another awkward thing about this animation.

Work on improving your animation and work a bit on timing with your voice acting, too. This definitely isn't bad, but it's not good either.

Balram740 responds:

Thanks for your feedback.actually i'm new to animation so i will try my best for next animation.

The animation for all of the character's actions are nice and smooth.

However, you should upload tests to your Dumping Grounds, not the Portal.

pushpendrasingh2719 responds:

Thank you, for animation feedback but I want to know about what is this dumping grounds why should I post this test animation there?

The drawing style and animation are both very cute. The sound effects used were nice.

This really needs music, though. It also needs a couple more sound effects towards the end. When the raccoon crashed into the tree and when the apple fell on it's head there should've been sound effects.

SandBagg responds:

Thank you for the feedback I just have trouble finding music and im afraid of copyright and shit like that so I tend to avoid it. Thank you again for the review.

Too short, but it's actually pretty decent for what it is.

The action was fast paced and done pretty well.

The intro was pretty cool and was better than the actual animation, but sadly, that's more of a bad thing than a good thing.

For your next movie, you really need to make it a lot longer. Also, maybe add in a background, too. Do anything you can to spruce up your future stick figure animations. I say this because stick figure animations are usually scored pretty badly here. There are just so many of them, so you really need to make yours outstanding if you want good scores.

These days, stick figure animations are like Madness animations, a lot of people don't like them because they're usually not done very well at all and are overdone. So, I hope you really work hard on your next animation! I'd hate to see you get a bad score because even though this movie is so short, it's already better than most stick animations that've come through in a while. You have a talent for it, so make your future animations as good as you can!

GridAnims responds:

thank you very much,this is really nice for you to say,i never heard anybody say i had talent,and to be said that my stickfigure anymation is better then current stick animations here is a complete honor,and as i said,this is just a demo,so my next project showcasing this char will be longer!
thanks for the constructive critizism,and sorry for my broken english!

Your animation is great! Also, your drawing style is very smooth and detailed.

Aside from that, this was pretty humorous. I love how you put Pikachu in a Luchador outfit. The lack of logic was pretty spot on, too.

Great job!

JoeAloh responds:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it :D

There's some humor here, but there's no animation. It's almost a slideshow from Movie Maker. It's hard to rate this one. Can you animate it? Slideshows are actually against the rules.

404Tales responds:

Ah, yeah I was worried about that. There's some hand animation in there but I guess Newgrounds may not be the place for content like this.

Now, you know Newgrounds is an animation site, right?

alphiewily responds:

Hi there, now that you guys mention it my fault. I didn't know that. I thought this site was for any video but thank you for telling me.

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